GEB 3213

Style Quiz II ‐ Concision Due Feb 26 at 11:59pm Points 25 Questions 25 Available until Feb 26 at 11:59pm Time Limit 35 Minutes This quiz was locked Feb 26 at 11:59pm. Aempt History Attempt Time Score LATEST Attempt 1 16 minutes 22 out of 25 Score for this quiz: 22 out of 25 Submitted Feb 26 at 11:47am This attempt took 16 minutes. 1 / 1 pts Question 1 How would you eliminate the redundancy of the following sentence? But on the other hand, we can perhaps point out that there may al...

One sentence in this pair of sentences is clear, with active verbs connected to clear subjects. The other sentence is indirect, with actions buried by nominalizations and abstractions for subjects. Select the passive sentence: When educators discover how to use computer-assisted instruction to support the way our brains learn, teachers can teach more complex subjects and students will learn faster. Correct! The loss of market share to Japan by domestic auto makers resulted in the disapp...

Style Quiz 4 ‐ Cumulave Quiz Results Score for this quiz: 21 out of 22 Submitted Apr 16 at 9:37pm This attempt took 25 minutes. 1 / 1 pts Question 1 Select the version of the sentence that is more concise: Except when such expenses do not exceed $20, the Insured may not refuse to provide the Insurer with all relevant receipts, checks, or other evidence of costs, when requested. For expenses over $20, the Insured will provide relevant receipts, checks, or other evidence of costs. Corr...

Question 1 1 / 1 pts Select the revision that reduces the following sentence to the essential information: Bringing the project to final completion three weeks early, the new manager earned our respectful regard. Delivering the project’s completion three weeks early was very respectable. The manager completed the project three weeks early. Three weeks early is a respectable way to complete a project, and for that, the manager earned our regard. Correct! We respected the new manager f...

Question 1 0 / 1 pts To link sentences cohesively within a paragraph, the writer should revise by including You Answered Active, concise sentences. Claims with supporting evidence. At least three sentences. Correct Answer Repetition of key words and transitions. Repeating key words promotes unity throughout the document, and transitions link ideas together logically. These two devices create cohesion within documents and paragraphs. Question 2 1 / 1 pts Skip to question text. Whic...